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Yi Yan. Reporter Ye Maolin photo Metropolis Daily News reporter Gao Long ago a well-known essay, Wuhan City tournament, won the grand prize in the essay, "you do not know the child's world" sparked heated debate on the network. In some users opinion, this article describes a somewhat "premature" the emotional story, also far more skillful writing skills of primary school level. The child's world, you know? Growth secret, perhaps who have. "Premature" essay Article, the author uses symbolism,CPXgR5HQ5L, from yourself to eat a sour green apple and wrote about her art teacher admired emotional experience. Eventually, with the help of her mother and teacher, she got rid of the tangle, to regain happiness. A site on May 14 of a post, this essay will be made public, and consistent with "an article Grand Prize (essay) I was shocked," the title. As of May 18 at 9:00 pm, the quote has 5452 people to view, reply to 142. Some users believe that this essay "in the choice of material seems too precocious." Some netizens said: "very delicate mental activity description, if not indicate grade middle school students feel at least." Others said:. "Absolutely does not believe in grades five children have such thoughts," In addition, some users of the article writing tips The skillful sophisticated skeptical that this does not look like a schoolboy writing,km2mnxK1rN, lacking children's innocence. However, there are many users expressed support: "The article looks fresh and natural, nothing worthy of criticism." Netizens "Eagle dance firmament CPA",MOsx9QAC0E, said: "People girl I hand my heart, the courage to write the true feelings, sunshine magnanimous, after all a good article! " User "Prairie Love Y", said adults should see the positive side,96znCY2YQd, the text of the "I" is not been out Sentimental misunderstanding it? So the future is better than the sun "afford to get fit" strong, right? Hazy emotions Yi Yan, 12 years old, Wuhan Qiaokou Dongfanghong second primary five (2) classes. Grand Prize writing her own feeling is: "like a dream." Last year, she also participated in the tournament, won the third prize. "When the exam was in a hurry to get the title, I do not know how to write." Yi Yan recalls, think of the usual exercises in Huang wrote the story with art, so he chose the theme of this personal experience. So after the draft, she completed this 2000-word article, out of the examination room at that moment, feeling "very relaxed." Moderator Huan confirmed that the text is indeed the real thing happened in the last semester. When he and mathematics teachers are feeling a bit depressed mood Yi Yin, later she learned her art teacher compare admiration. . "These hazy emotions is normal, the primary school students are not uncommon, but never called puppy love or romance" Peter Guo Huan said: "We have also seen a child for students and teachers of affection, but not children now so outspoken, dare to express. " Guo Huan Bo with examples of green apples and red apples lift, and soon let Yi Yan out of the confusion. Again discussed the matter yesterday, Yan Yi admits, was only to Huang "comparative worship", because he is very humorous, combined her strong interest in painting, drawing level admired teacher. Active girl "I really like Gorky's" childhood ", describing very delicate, to raise the level of my writing is very helpful." In addition to reading these classics, Yi Yan also made no secret of children's literature writer Yang Hongying's favorite: "her" horse small jump, "" cat diary "I have read,scarpe hogan, and sometimes imitate her writing style." Principal HONG Xia introduction, by the end of April, writing event organizers sent two staff members had come to investigate the true level of Yi Yan school of writing, look at her usual assignments, case and asks her performance in school, and finally awarded her the Grand Prize. At school, Yi Yan regarded as a "little star" is not only a good squad, or school track team one. Fourth grade art groups joined the school, classes do blackboard, bulletin boards always have her figure. Yi Yan was born in an ordinary worker's family. "Her dynamic personality, temper straight, a bit like a tomboy." Yi Wu Lijun Yan mother said. Wu Lijun frankly, she knows her essay in the matter, but did not pierce this layer of paper windows, but did not blame the children, but to help teachers, deftly guided her out of the emotional confusion. Writing daughter took the grand prize, but my father Shun Yi Bing has not decided to let the children take the expertise development, "She is now the task is to be a learning-based, writing as interest culture." Mature in advance After reading the text, I wonder, the more people sent a voice of reason. "This is a normal phenomenon, adults do not make a fuss." Hubei University professor of psychology, said Yan Mei complex, studies have shown that our young sexually mature from the previous 14 years has gradually moved up to about 12 years old, this time The children of the opposite sex began hazy impression, but not the real love, parents and teachers do not suppress the public and the accused,tn reuqin pas cher, such as Yan Yi will write their true feelings,woolrich outlet italia, and accept the guidance of teachers and parents, very worthy of promotion and learning. Pupils these seem a bit "premature" essay, adults should hold a tolerant attitude. After all,louboutin pas cher, now the children very much access to information channels, adults must learn to guide their children to know the intricate world. Perhaps, the child's mind is not as complicated as imagined. Yi Yan reporter asked: "Some people say you online essay bit 'premature', how do you see?" She asked curiously: "'precocious' is good or not good?" Reporter A:. "This is not to say," she wanted up to say: "That I do not think!" Writing Excerpts Do you know the child's world? Some people can not understand, the child's world is like, like colorful bubbles, count them, to see can not read. If you break it, it will disappear without a trace. Children of the world is so magical, wonderful ...... In all the teachers, I most liked art Huang. He was wearing a black frame glasses, slightly curled hair,85DcjocttF, sparse stubble,MT6s6YJkrC, reveals the artist's style, like Van Gogh or Gauguin like Cezanne ...... This feeling has been pressed in my heart, do not say to anyone, I'm afraid other people Road three four, pointing. But I can not control this feeling, let it spread ...... I'm so sad, the original, from the beginning to now, all I am a man in his one-man show,be7R00JhUK,louboutin femme, a nobody knows more no cheers monologue. I suddenly see the light, I had been carries a green apple, sour, astringent. I know, I do not love green apple, because it has not matured; I also know that green apples only continue to learn from sunlight,Ljmd7DJg65, through photosynthesis, to become exudes a seductive scent of red apples. Welcome to comment I want to comment Microblogging Recommended | today's hot microblogging (edit: SN026) 

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